Neela Nath Das

I Neither Love You - Poem by Neela Nath Das

I neither love you,
nor hate you....
can't stay, can't leave.
I'm in great fever-
I want to flow,
wish to glow,
dashing against reef,
but, I am not a river.
I desire to be wind,
to get entwined,
forcing clouds to give,
their drops on me to shiver.
I can't touch,
can't go much,
but, feel a kind of grief,
as I can't be yours ever!

Comments about I Neither Love You by Neela Nath Das

  • Silver Star - 3,224 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/9/2012 11:26:00 PM)

    Very emotional. I like the flow of the lines. Good write (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (10/9/2012 12:18:00 PM)

    dashing against reef,
    but, I am not a river.

    Wonderful lines-they go deep in the mind of the reader (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,928 Points * Sunprincess * (10/7/2012 7:33:00 PM)

    maybe the next life you can join your heart breaking..very imaginative.. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 7, 2012

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