I Only Had One Heart Poem by Luz Hanaii

I Only Had One Heart



I gave you the most precious thing I had
and you disdainfully took it for granted
you set it out to dry, abandoned, forgotten,
collecting dust
and now you want me to give you my heart again?
but that's just not possible,
for I only had one heart to give

Sunday, January 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: deceit,love and life,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yoonoos Peerbocus 01 June 2020

love demands fidelity well pieced

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Luz Hanaii 01 June 2020

Thank you for agreeing with my view in this poem. Fidelity and trust are very important in any relationship be it professional or love.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2020

for I only had one heart to give, so true. That ungrateful one, that does not know how to appreciate love given. Dare not to ask again, to forgive is entirely different than being a fool. Excellent poem, dear Luz. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing poem. God's Blessings in Abundance for you. Sent with love, Sylvia

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Luz Hanaii 24 January 2020

Dear Sylvia, Thank you for reading and commenting. It's always nice to hear from you. I hope all is well with you and yours. Lots of blessings and love. Luz

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Kostas Lagos 20 January 2020

You fooled me once shame on you, you fooled me twice shame on me...great poem Luz!

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Luz Hanaii 20 January 2020

Thank you Kostas, yes, we can forgive but not be a fool.

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