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Kristin F


I Remember


i walked down the road
with a pen in my hand

i remember so long ago
when our eyes first met
i remember so long ago
when i first called out your name

i remember so long ago
when we first held hands
i remember so long ago
when we first kissed

i remember so long ago
the promises you made under the stars
i remember so long ago
you were there for me when i needed you


i remember not long ago
we drifted apart
i remember not long ago
you broke my heart

i remember
so much love used to be there
now, it's all vanished

Submitted: Monday, December 29, 2008
Edited: Monday, December 29, 2008

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  • Katherine Ng Li Hoon (1/9/2009 2:26:00 AM)

    I felt very sorry that this person beak your heart but keep strong and some day someone true and sincere will come into your life! That is my best and sincere wish to you from my heart! (Report) Reply

  • Rudy Hossam (12/31/2008 8:55:00 AM)

    very touching...almost brought tears to me eyes...and I'm sorry to hear it was so easy for someone to break your heart so easily...very well written (Report) Reply

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