I said hello
She said hi
I said i love u
She said why
I said without you i'll die
She said I don't care, you can cry,
Then my heart was broken
And finally, she said forever Bye
short and to he point. this is something that can happen any time. be ware.
You can pick any words, simple or whatever, still it can be beautiful..what a talent you have! so precious to have one like your talent.._Soul
I have nothing to say. Your poem was all. with some words you create a wide meaning. best wishes...
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I would like to translate this poem
So casual departure! No grief, nothing. Very nice work.Loved this job.