I searched every bit and corner
Returned with empty hands
What was lost was hidden where
Wanted to know my palms
It was there, I searched in,
Inside her beguiling heart
What you lost was me
But I am not there
I heard my heart say sad
May 21st,2009
will our search ever ends, I wonder? ? ? ? I don't know what people says but I think it is another master piece from you bhayya..few lines from one of my poem 'I searched the mountains I searched the plains I searched the jungles I even searched you in the rain I feel you next to me but I'm unable to see where you are' search is still on thanks and many 10'ssss rgds asif
This is a stunning poem. The way you expressed your thought is dramatic which is wonderful. Read it with delight.
Passion perfussing…melancholy has become so ‘High’…poetically …making readers to ‘Sigh’… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 hf
touching and so passionate... very meaningful...really.. very nice thoughts.. 10+++ _maia_
Such a sad and passionately written poem. May you find one day, yourself in her heart once more! A most splendid read thank you.... Best wishes, *10*! Friend Thad
A touching poem indeed! well conveyed too. grt work, keep it up! !
Hi Kesav you should allow us to vote, I would of givin it a ten.A most thought provoking write, thank you for sharing Best regards,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
im not gonna lie it wasnt your best, but it was pretty good i love the ironic ending i thought you lost, , very good on expressing yourself