hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 52,941 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Tease - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Punish for what?
I have never fought
Over anything on any issue
It is your view

Of course I tease
And release
Some sentences
To make you little tense

It is part of friendship
As we are common persons on ship
That sails with lots of passengers
Some one is stranger and some one is lover too

Do not bear
And fear
For showing truth
As it needs no proof

I am no eve teaser
Or flirt mover
I am lone traveler
Always smile and offer

It is journey
That is already
Going short day by day
Making us ready for any other day


Comments about I Tease by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 9:50:00 PM)

    welcome Edidiong Etukudoh
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 7:49:00 PM)

    as expected, great lines.
    2 Aug by jerry mozes to I tease (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 11:21:00 AM)

    good work


    Judie Jackson37 minutes ago
    Love the flow and feel of this poet's work. He shows much depth and insight in construction and bringing the poem to its climax. Very good work!
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 11:21:00 AM)

    good work


    gannicus Gallic40 minutes ago
    Great poem nice work can you read and review one of mine (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 11:20:00 AM)

    Meh

    Jakob Cordes38 minutes ago
    As I find so often with poetry posted to this site, far too often really, this is a basically good message, but it's obscured and tainted by confused structure and bad syntax. I get what the idea of the poem is, but the experience is ruined by my having to correct it in my mind to make it readable.
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 11:19:00 AM)

    Life is a journey


    Patricia Calhoun-Porter39 minutes ago
    Maybe we'll get another day, but if not, make the best out of Today.
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 11:19:00 AM)

    It's ok


    Sarah Adams41 minutes ago
    Nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 9:21:00 AM)

    welcom Attia Saeed, Rohani Daud and Cheryl Serious Nwankwo like this.
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  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/2/2014 6:28:00 AM)

    Quite Interesting poem. Beautiful lines....
    Of course I tease
    And release
    Some sentences
    To make you little tense.....Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 4:51:00 AM)

    Punish for what?
    I have never fought (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 2, 2014



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