. I Walk In The Sunshine Poem by Adeline Foster

. I Walk In The Sunshine

Rating: 4.3


I Walk In The Sunshine

I Walk In The Sunshine
You live in the night
You're not where I'm going
My future is bright
I'll live in the sunshine
I've chosen the light.

Saturday, August 4, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: nostalgia,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelvin Owusu 06 September 2012

I love this, nice pretty straight forward very positive

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Cordell Rich 11 September 2012

An sad little poem in a way. The author clearly is interested in the person who lives in the night but if forced to make a choice because of personal principles or values. We all make these types of choices but there is always something sad about them at least to me.

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Stephanie Sterlin 22 June 2014

Nice poem Adeline i really really really love it, you did great.

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Maya Hanson 13 May 2014

Beautiful and optimistic, keep writing!

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Mary Forrester 14 September 2013

I like the positivity in this poem

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Dale Mullock 03 January 2013

Hi Adeline! You asked me to look at this poem some time ago but I have been absent from this site but I have returned... and found this little gem of poem. This poem is like dancing the quickstep, quick, upbeat and set to keep you on the tip of your toes... leave them in your wake, leave them behind, they are history and your future is bright. New starts, new beginnings and it is 2013, hope that it is a good year for you :)

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Payal Parande 13 September 2012

amazing thought mam.i like the way how your words flow like a melody which is simply incredible... thank you for sharing love, payal

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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