hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 43,772 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Wish Life Remains - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Life is not for learning
It is for turning
Tide in your favor
With struggle and honor

Nothing can be learnt
If that is what the sentence is meant
The power of quick decision
May make move with precision

Nothing can be played
As life has its own way to be swayed
It may always reign supreme
We may have to submit but can nicely dream

There is no system to follow
Yu may have to allow
Your helplessness into success
With tough dealing and right access

I wish life remains same
For all people to claim
It poses many problems with challenge
Person has to anticipate and manage


Comments about I Wish Life Remains by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/21/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    I like your work, where else do you post your work, i will support you just has you have supported mine btw you still havent liked my page
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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/21/2013 11:17:00 PM)

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    lovely!
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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    fátima Silva likes this. Fátima Silva Thank you very lovely loved, welcome friend... I wish you a beautiful Sunday evening! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    Utpal Moran
    Inspiring indeed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 9:45:00 AM)

    It goods

    Erin Echols46 minutes ago
    I liked it but it wasn't my favorite poem it was descriptive Which I loved and you put yourn heart and slouul into which makes you a great writer good job and happy writtings
    Comment +1
    Good Message (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    Katarina Davis50 minutes ago
    please correct spelling....but otherwise nicely done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 8:54:00 AM)

    Life is not for learning
    It is for turning (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 22, 2013


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