I Wish It Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
I Wish It
Call me from far
I shall emerge as star
To guide and act
And remain yours in fact
Why do I think?
Often about you and sink
I have no answer
But make sincere offer
You were first to enter
This desolate center
The garden was flowered
And the scene was altered
I wish it to remain
And be maintained
You come with fragrance
I shall regret not even at once
Yet fortunately we met
Defeated the fate
This was our destiny
As destined by the almighty
Comprehensive SarahKnova Woods53 minutes ago I really like the first stanza even though it has a rhyme. I am not the biggest fan of rhyming; but you made it work in this first stanza :) Maybe in second one put make (a) sincere offer? The entire piece reminds me of being in love and knowing YOU will always be there for that person but they are in this case just not able to share that level of love you have for them. Reminds me of the first time I fell in love and life slowly putting me through many painful years and tears; nights up drinking far too much and writing about the pain of why would this person not see how deeply I cared for them. Thank you for sharing :) Comment +1
Aw! Destined to be! Abigail Foster57 minutes ago Very nice, I like the message.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Intriguing and thought provoking. I like it. stan brierly58 minutes ago Keep writing and sharing.