Shalom Freedman

Silver Star - 3,445 Points (Troy New York)

I Wrote A Poem With The Stars As My Light - Poem by Shalom Freedman

I WROTE A POEM WITH THE STARS AS MY LIGHT

I wrote a poem with the stars as my light
And thought of all the distances between the lines-
If only we could reach one another
But with each message we grow farther apart-

The universe was closer once
And so were we-
But now how great and greater the distances-

One day soon you will pass out of my horizon
And we will be as if we never were-

Even the greatest Love cannot be remembered
If there is not some small light shining still
Between the stars.


Comments about I Wrote A Poem With The Stars As My Light by Shalom Freedman

  • Rookie - 348 Points Vipins Puthooran (11/6/2011 2:03:00 PM)

    it's a great poem, , , well penned! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,804 Points Paul Brookes (11/6/2011 12:42:00 PM)

    What a beautiful and heartfelt poem 10++ thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 6, 2011



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