Identity Of The Self Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Identity Of The Self

Rating: 5.0


I suffer from the worldliness
I suffer in silence
A loss of identity
Adience

I think
You give me
A sense of identity
Love

(2009/11/9)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 16 September 2009

Wonderful to read you again, my dear friend. Your last lines are very touching and memorable. Brief, but beautiful. Warm wishes, Sandra

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

You give me A sense of identity Rachel Ann Butler

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 11 September 2009

Yeah, we must not lose our identity. When love is given without a lie, then love shall bring freedom and freedom can make one understand him/herself.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 15 September 2009

sense of identity...love...beautiful

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M M 15 October 2009

Identity given through the eyes of the beloved is a reinforcing power. But one should have already found this self-identity, perhaps, to accept oneself before being fully accepted/loved by someone else. It helps love to be even greater between two persons. Suffering makes us feel our identity within ourself, and we are not always ready to go through this 'test'. In this case, the love of others can help rebuilding a better image of oneself, but the way is still to be walked to find oneself... and accept everything that we are, even our weaknesses... (to try to correct them perhaps but to feel who we are first) Very well written! 10

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 26 September 2009

meaningful poem, nicely ended..

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Anjali Sinha 22 September 2009

good one When you suffer, I suffer Eid Mubarak dearest -10 anjali

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Emma Adamyan 21 September 2009

so cute and nice. i liked and glad u`ve come back

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Flavia S.v. 19 September 2009

lovely, self introspection. good write

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