If Ever.... Poem by Brian Kamara

If Ever....

Rating: 5.0


If ever beauty
Could be described
In more than words,
In more than feelings and emotions,
In more than the eye could see;
Then it could only be you.

If ever love
Could be described
As more than a four letter word,
As more than a rush of hormones,
As more than nature’s way of ensuring sustenance,
As more than God’s gift to us;
Then it only could be in what I feel for you.

If ever happiness
Could be described
As more than a smile,
As more than a joke between friends,
As more than being at peace with all,
As more than laughter; whether genuine or otherwise;
Then it only be in what I feel when I see you.

If ever making love
Could be described
As more than the gratification of sexual needs,
As more than procreation,
As more than a physical act between two people,
As more than devoid of emotion;
Then it could only be in what we share.

If ever you and me
Could be described
As more than just friends,
As more than ordinary lovers,
As more than meant for each other;
Then it could only be the truth.
- I love you -

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 19 July 2009

nice combination between anaphora ans similes...well written poem..10++

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Ian Bowen 19 July 2009

Brian, lots to like in your poem. Will done. Ian

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Shweta Advani 19 July 2009

Ur poem just brought a smile on my face....beautifully expressed....must be alucky girl for whom u have written it...keep posting: ...u write well: -)

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Bhavika Sicka 19 July 2009

Beautifully written.

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