If My Soul Poem by Patti Masterman

If My Soul

Rating: 5.0


If my soul were the whitest rose,
It could never be white enough;
If my heart were an amber stone,
It couldn't hold in its amber cup

Enough days and ways to tell you
All the things that you mean to me-
But I try to tell you with my kiss,
And the way that my body quakes..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 15 September 2011

Fantastic first stanza Second stanza is writtten in a different tone, still very poetic. Overall good poem, Patti.

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Jim Troy 14 September 2011

Such depth covering any doubts a love would ever have about their lady fair.... and the passions just on fire Great love poem. I have saved this one... It is above a 10 Jim Troy

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Eric Cockrell 13 September 2011

strong, and passionate... love this one!

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