If Only A Poem Could Explain Poem by Laurette Nichole

If Only A Poem Could Explain

Rating: 5.0


Maybe I'd love you as loud as thunder. Or as quiet as an afternoons rain.
I suppose I'd love you that way, If weather could explain.
I might love you as much as water is wet. Or as dry as the desert is any day.
I suppose I'd love you that way, If moisture could explain.
I could love you as much as the Rocky Mountains are high. Or as deep as the Grand Canyon is at base.
I suppose I'd love you that way, If either height or depth could explain.
I guess I'd love you like each loving word in every stanza, anyday.
I'm sure I'd love you that way.
If Only A Poem Could Explain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 12 July 2013

i like the poem for what is says except for the words.......in any loving way. your meaning, to me, is unclear here. if it read in every stanza of love poems i would feel i understood you better. thanks for sharing.

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Martin O'Neill 05 April 2012

Laurette, this is beautiful. It has a perfect tempo, the words naturally fall into place and when I just read it out loud (In my mind the surest test of a poem) it was wonderful. Welcome to PH. I look forward to reading more of your work. Martin.

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Romeo Della Valle 01 April 2012

It certainly can! You have clearly shown it through your powerful and colorful poem! It is well crafted and deep in its content and also you have shown your passionate feeling and talent to the whole Poetry World! WELCOME! Thank you for sharing this amazing write and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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