If U R Not With Me Poem by sagar patil.

If U R Not With Me

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if u are not with me then there is nothing (for me)
through i admit the world is young & beautiful
make me wretched again, make me cry again....

ohh you inflicter of torture, return from somewhere...
your image is stuck in my sight
like you even your sorrow is beautiful...

if you are not with me then there is nothing (for me)

wherever i look, wherever they go
my crazy eyes search only for u...

through i am living, but
there is no life in me
ohh.. my life (my love) where are you lost? ? ?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i wrt ths poem tht tym m admt in hsptl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 07 June 2013

through i am living, but there is no life in me...how beautifully u expressed ur emotions..great

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Kasia Fedyk 22 August 2012

Divine Beautiful! I love your souls expression.

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Payal Parande 21 August 2012

so poignant yet beautifully written..i am no expert but i loved how it flows each word describe a deeper emotion which is bewitching and full...love it... thank you for sharing, payal

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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