sagar patil.

(03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

if u r not with me

if u are not with me then there is nothing (for me)
through i admit the world is young & beautiful
make me wretched again, make me cry again....

ohh you inflicter of torture, return from somewhere...
your image is stuck in my sight
like you even your sorrow is beautiful...

if you are not with me then there is nothing (for me)

wherever i look, wherever they go
my crazy eyes search only for u...

through i am living, but
there is no life in me
ohh.. my life (my love) where are you lost? ? ?

Submitted: Tuesday, August 21, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, August 22, 2012

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i wrt ths poem tht tym m admt in hsptl

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  • Farah Ilyas (6/7/2013 1:28:00 PM)

    through i am living, but
    there is no life in beautifully u expressed ur emotions..great (Report) Reply

  • Payal Parande (8/21/2012 2:44:00 PM)

    so poignant yet beautifully written..i am no expert but i loved how it flows each word describe a deeper emotion which is bewitching and it...
    thank you for sharing,
    payal (Report) Reply

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