sagar patil.

Rookie - 2 Points (03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

If U R Not With Me - Poem by sagar patil.

if u are not with me then there is nothing (for me)
through i admit the world is young & beautiful
make me wretched again, make me cry again....

ohh you inflicter of torture, return from somewhere...
your image is stuck in my sight
like you even your sorrow is beautiful...

if you are not with me then there is nothing (for me)

wherever i look, wherever they go
my crazy eyes search only for u...

through i am living, but
there is no life in me
ohh.. my life (my love) where are you lost? ? ?


Poet's Notes about The Poem

i wrt ths poem tht tym m admt in hsptl

Comments about If U R Not With Me by sagar patil.

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/7/2013 1:28:00 PM)

    through i am living, but
    there is no life in me...how beautifully u expressed ur emotions..great (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (8/22/2012 9:29:00 AM)

    Divine Beautiful! I love your souls expression. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/21/2012 2:44:00 PM)

    so poignant yet beautifully written..i am no expert but i loved how it flows each word describe a deeper emotion which is bewitching and full...love it...
    thank you for sharing,
    payal (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 22, 2012


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