john tiong chunghoo

Bronze Star - 2,472 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

Illusion - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

a death warrant signed
with the very thing we hang onto for life
veins and arteries in a million knots
not an inch to let go for breath
the physique festers in a despicable illusion
we had clung onto with pain and expectation


Comments about Illusion by john tiong chunghoo

  • Silver Star - 3,791 Points Dave Walker (10/30/2011 5:51:00 AM)

    Wow. A truly great poem. It really blew my mind.
    A fantastic write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 30, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, October 31, 2011


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