Imagination Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Imagination

Rating: 5.0


Imagination is my granddaughter,
She loves me always better.

She does often cry,
To remain jolly I try.

She reads and writes very well,
With her mother she does dwell.

Sometimes we do make merry,
We eat rice, cakes and curry.

She is theist, she believes in God,
To worship, she never feels odd.

I love her and wish her progress,
In sweet smiles she does impress.

Monday, November 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: granddaughter,love,spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 12 November 2018

KALPANA, WOW! A Beautiful name for a girl. This poem shows the reader much affection from grandfather towards granddaughter and is written in such a a way that children can read this too. What a broad minded Poet are you. Couplets in poems is oft easier to read for everyone.The most beautiful lines in this poem are: She is theist, she believes in God, To worship, she never feels odd. God's Blessings in Abundance for you, your beloved family and for Kalpana especially. Amen. A 10++++++++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 November 2018

ADDITION: A 10++++++++++ means Myriad of 10´s and much much more OR Full Vote 10. These latest weeks, I am just accustomed to the Votes and Ratings. I do hope that I have done this in a correct way. I stay open for advice in this direction, Sir. Thank you so much.

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Bill Cantrell 12 November 2018

Wonderful poem for loved granddaughter!

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2018

Like Grandfather, like granddaughter....She will follow your footsteps and will take forward your baton....My best wishes and love for her, God Bless You and your entire family.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 November 2018

A lovely poem for a granddaughter. At a tender age she has already an impressive personality. I am very sure she will treasure with all her heart this wonderful poem lovingly penned by her grandfather. Very well crafted couplet.10

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Khalida Bano Ali 19 November 2018

A beautiful personification with mastery of Mahakul Ji.

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 November 2018

lovely penned the couplets on granddaughter

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Tom Allport 17 November 2018

A lovely poem and tribute to someone most loved.........written from the heart Kumarmani

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Simone Inez Harriman 14 November 2018

Knowing kids and how much we try when they cry, I was smiling reading your lovely poem about your grandaughter.Beautiful! .

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Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2018

Ever such precious heart and beauty, this brings oh, so many smiles! .. Beautiful, beautiful, sentiments and treasure of the most beautiful kind! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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