In A Garden Poem by kite remedy

In A Garden

Rating: 5.0


There was a garden,
inside of me,
decorated by flowers,
and green drapery.
It was not static or tranquil or so quietly,
now that from my chest I heard
and listened to the beat of its silent revelry..

One day I could feel,
when one of the flowers grew ill.
When it came the time,
it withered and dried.
So hard my efforts were to keep it alive.
Yet no sign I saw that it would survive..

The pain was tremendous
when I saw it died.
I wished I could consider
that it was a lie.
Lost hope was too enormous
to be casted aside
from a desperate heart
and a desperate mind..

There was a garden
deep inside of me.
There lived many flowers
and they bloomed fervently.
One day, one flower
died and to Neverland, it left me.
However those which were left
kept on telling me me,
'must you not falter,
from a single tragedy.
Hope exists forever,
though you cannot see.'
And as I fortified myself
with its vivid memory.
The flower which has dithered,
illuminated in front of me..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 30 November 2008

beautiful, thanks for sharing 10

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<font color =fusha>Amy 30 November 2008

great poem really appealing to the reader :)

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Joseph Poewhit 01 December 2008

Delicate poem of a delicate subject a flower

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Min Sia 09 December 2008

Very inspiring..and lovely interpretation.. Words neatly selected..very good sequence and fine imagery... Truly..a piece of art... I'm gonna add it to my fav list...

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Caroline Weeks 06 December 2008

Hope exists forever, though you cannot see.' That's how it is when all else is lost, Kite...hope remains. Beautiful write, thank-you for sharing! Caroline

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Omar Ali Sabar 04 December 2008

I hope the garden inside you blossoms forever

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asma Jone 03 December 2008

Hope does exist even though it seems you have lost everything..but again seriously you write beautiful

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Subbaraman N V 03 December 2008

NURTURE THE GARDEN IN YOU AND YOU WILL REAP YTHE BENEFITS SURE!

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