In A Little While... Poem by tiyler durden

In A Little While...

Rating: 5.0


In a little while
I will go home
feeling free

sitting on my sofa
comfortable as can be
drinking a nice cup of tea

in a little while
freedom will come to me
in a little while

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 09 March 2006

Nice rhyme, very nice write Patricia

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***** ********* 03 February 2006

tiyler this is brilliant, you express the worn weary workers desire for freedom so perfectly in your short poem. 10 from smiling at you, Tai

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Charles Chaim Wax 03 February 2006

now this is a great poem! so sure and true and so heartfelt capturing the longing deep in every heart for what? that bit of peace where the soul can finally smile

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