In Absense Of The Sun Poem by Neela Nath Das

In Absense Of The Sun

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There's a gloominess,
Nature is in monochrome.
Grey is the color
Which reigns everywhere.
Birds forget to twit.
In absence of the Sun,
I drown in despair.

Sunday, August 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: despair
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 26 August 2014

Short and sweet......! When the sun is out of sight, Nature will be in a dull monochrome! In contrast with a sunny day, the day wii be very gloomy! The change in Nature affects our moods too! A dull day leaves our spirits so dull.....! Birds and animals are the first to feel that change!

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Unwritten Soul 25 August 2014

Surely you success to highlight the importance of something that most of us take for granted...may your life has it own sun to keep darkness away from it touch your smile_Soul

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Chuy Amante 24 August 2014

Put all the lamps in one room and brighten the place up! ! ! ! ! ! You are the LIGHT NEELA! ! !

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Gajanan Mishra 24 August 2014

Birds forget to twit, , what is life!

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