If he or she is clumsy in places, those are clumsy places
and when he or she says I have a lover or a husband or a wife, we or I feel sad,
or is it just clumsy?
can't one make it simple, or at least simpler?
or why can't it be that way for just one moment?
I am writing this on a hip pocket pad, a waterproof one
but I am not crying, never crying
and it never rains when or where in some northern or southern or western
or eastern city I am writing
to tell you I've got a crush on you
cootchi coo
the waterproof cost me extra
the words are extra; they don't come with the pad
the crush, the love is extra
and you are extra.
oh, wake up.
Amazing flight of imagery has added spice in this simple and straight forward flow. Nice write and deserves recognition as modern poem of the Day. So, heartiest congrats.
Congratulations for being selected modern poem of the day.... Good job....
Loved this.Really an interesting poem. ' the waterproof cost me extra the words are extra; they don't come with the pad, ' is very nice. Congrats.
Very interesting, straight poetry...if dozy person fails to wake on reading this then they are also stupid.
Beautiful wake up call Juliana. Congratulations for being member of day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The waterproof! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.