Goldheart Bird


In My Dreams - Poem by Goldheart Bird

Animals would live happily in the wild,
Flowers would dance,
And the wind will play ing my hair,
In my dreams

My shoes would glisten
my dress will be a velvet in a golden glow.
And my hair, twisted elegantly in a braid.
In my dreams
My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string,
In my dreams

I might dream on
But I have cofidence,
That one day, my dreams will be true.


Comments about In My Dreams by Goldheart Bird

  • Rookie - 369 Points Shania K. Younce (3/18/2014 8:46:00 PM)

    A very elegant write. It is a beautiful poem. Bien! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,587 Points Khairul Ahsan (1/24/2014 11:13:00 AM)

    You have successfully described your wonderful dreams, in that, we all saw your dreams as we read the poem. Well done!
    'And my hair, twisted elegantly in a braid.' - I liked this!
    'My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string,
    In my dreams' - This is so beautiful, so imaginative!
    'But I have cofidence,
    That one day, my dreams will be true.' - So be it, my dear poet! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Kaelyn Kawai (1/22/2014 7:25:00 PM)

    Your AMAZING. just AMAZING. NO WORDS, JUST AMAZING. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 324 Points Beach Girl (1/15/2014 11:09:00 AM)

    What a lovely dream GB! It would be fantastic if we could all dream of flowers dancing and wind playing in our hair. I really loved the verse, 'My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string,
    In my dreams.' Just beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,772 Points Bri Edwards (12/30/2013 2:03:00 PM)

    Allison, you didn't REALLY dream all that did you? the other night i dreamed i kept being too slow to catch an elevator in a hospital. hmmm? i don't think it really was meaningful to my life. i rarely remember dreams. check out spelling (a typo is all) in line number 3.
    here's 65 dollars; go buy the dress. what? that isn't enough? good grief! bri :) thanks for sharing. i liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,064 Points Kanav Justa (12/23/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    , , its good that you dream good, , , i am sick of my wierd dreams that makes no sense, , , ,
    nice write, , keep penning, , (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 2, 2013



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