In Same Boat Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

In Same Boat

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We are all same in boat
Only we move finely dressed in coat
Everything covered and camouflaged
Well conceived and ably managed

Why do we offer lies lady when she is open with offer?
Why to present untruth when she has nothing to differ?
In fact complete human race is prone to offer lies
A person on death bed repeats same when dies

If love some one we may have some inhibitions
There may be some rivalries and competitions
Some bunch of lies is alright to achieve something
But out right to say outrageous to ladies is meant for nothing

We are selfish animal and have nothing more to establish
You may have reasons to tell lies to accomplish
But that end with the attainment of success
Everything counts secondary with full access

Let us admit we are otherwise failures
Our life becomes shaky and unsure
What gimmick we enter into is unwarranted
No one may like it and in fact wanted

So we are all in game and known for changing colors
We do sometimes to gain proximity or favors
That can be waived for simple reasons
As it is adopted by nature in the form of seasons

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2011

Send message | *ewa* ♪ good poem..thank you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2011

We are all same in boat Only we move finely dressed in coat

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2011

VMelvina Germain Excellent poem Hasmukh, certainly lies and love just don't go together. In a relationship where deceit runs rampant causes far too much heartache..... about an hour ago · Unlike · 1 person

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2011

Oladipo Kehinde Paul love boat 21 hours ago · Unlike · 1 person Mutiu Olawuyi A very nice lyrical piece of art! 3 hours ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2011

qumi jan Living a lie' means to live a life pretending you are someone or something you are not. 'I won't live a lie' means I refuse to live in a dishonest way, I refuse to lie about who I am and I want to come clean and be honest.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2011

Send message | » Elż bieta Kry.. Very nice.... ale... czy każ de serca moż na ocenić ....? Chwile rozstania najpię kniejsze są ... ż eby wrócić ....

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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