In The Market Place Poem by uchenna nnodum

In The Market Place

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I hear the honk of a horn
Amid the echo of voices.
A new day had been born
And for people to make their choices.

I see a young child carrying something on his head
But to my dismay he looked under fed
Like that of a pregnant woman he had a conspicuous belly
I thought what was on his head was a bit heavy

Again i hear the clang of a bell
As i make my way through
Jostling one another like in hell
But cannot believe it is true

i see so many indifferent faces
May be because of the scourging sun
And chatting before are ladies
Pretending nothing is going on

For what i see
Has been for ages long
And will always be
As long as there is the day long.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Atara Feildsofrainbows 05 October 2009

Some of the tenses could be fixed and this could be a little smoother, but over all this is quite a moving work.

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Rovert Nworb 20 July 2009

I can see it in my head, well done

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