Jake Deeds

Rookie - 131 Points (5/11/1965 / Arkansas)

In Time - Poem by Jake Deeds

Has love been lost on falls' first frost
And the sadness, remember, the days of December
Fear not, the cusp of winds, for renewal begins
And the shadows of moon reign in June
Memories fade and hopes ensue, something borrowed, something blue..

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  • Gold Star - 17,873 Points Daniel Brick (4/16/2015 10:42:00 AM)

    Time really speeds up in this poem, it doesn't go tick tick tick but WHOOSH. There is an impatience to get to a new season as if the season held the key to an end to aloneness..But I don't feel depressed by the poem because the faith in the processes of nature - time itself - seem hopeful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 17, 2011

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