Jake Deeds

Rookie - 45 Points (5/11/1965 / Arkansas)

Fly By Night


On top of the mountain and beside the stream
Where the switchbacks converged and split the seam
And the eddies swirled and churned moonbeams
I fell in love within a dream……

And in the absence of black and white
Vivid colors illuminated an endless night
And down the mountain the stream took flight
In my slumber of superlative delight

Was it truly a dream or only surreal
This vision of Rainbows in a wicker creel
And a length of bamboo and a rusty reel
That all led to this envisaged Zeal...<><

Submitted: Monday, March 21, 2011
Edited: Monday, May 23, 2011

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Comments about this poem (Fly By Night by Jake Deeds )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anthony Burge (4/7/2013 2:09:00 AM)

    I was immersed in the swirling eddies of your moonlit stream.
    Beautiful imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 335 Points Jim Hogg (2/25/2012 8:19:00 AM)

    Shades of Coleridge glint from this one Jake.. Funny how the dream is often more vivid than the reality... You've conjured up an enchanting scene... If we could only stay in such moments just a while longer.. or go back to them now and again. No fish? (Report) Reply

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