Maggie Munro


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Do I miss you more?
Your words absent
Hollow space on white page
Where our love
Unwritten, denies all being.

Do I miss you more?
Your words painting
Masterpiece of passion
Where our love
Unveiled, reveals its truth.

Could I miss you more?
The silence falls
Etched beneath life's vellum
Where once love
Unrestrained, bloomed vivid hue.

Submitted: Sunday, November 04, 2012

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Once, lovers had to wait for an exchange of letters in the mail, and that might take days or even weeks. The agony of expectation occurred daily when the postie came. The advent of email and smartphones means that lovers can suffer that same agony so much more frequently and efficiently. Ain't technology grand?

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  • Gold Star - 10,508 Points * Sunprincess * (6/24/2014 10:05:00 PM)

    .............the last stanza is so powerful....yes silence speaks very loudly.... when once two people were so in love they couldn't get enough of each other... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,205 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/18/2014 4:51:00 AM)

    The poem is beautiful, the note thoughtful and the title, of course, is wonderful!
    I have a poem titled 'Our Lost Treasure Trove' in which I said how I missed the handwritten letters of my love. If you have time, please go through it and say a few words if you like. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,007 Points Mohammad Skati (2/4/2013 12:51:00 PM)

    HI, MAGGIE. I ENJOYED YOUR POEM AND I VOTED FOR.GOOD LUCK. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 187 Points Prasanna Kumari (12/5/2012 5:50:00 AM)

    good poem with beautiful expressions bringing more feeling..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Owain Glyn (12/1/2012 11:50:00 AM)

    Maybe love is more secure on paper! I often take a Book to bed, ho, ho ho! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (12/1/2012 7:03:00 AM)

    Nice poem.. well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 115 Points Terry O'leary (11/23/2012 5:29:00 PM)

    Ah yes... the burdens on modern day life... very well expressed and captured, Maggie... Terry (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,544 Points Lyn Paul (11/8/2012 5:14:00 AM)

    Well written Maggie, put together so well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Red O'mara (11/4/2012 6:10:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, Maggie. Lucky feller to have you miss him like that -.he shouldn't give you the chance to. (Report) Reply

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