Incomprehensible Poem by Tan Pratonix

Incomprehensible

Rating: 5.0


The tip of my nose and her nose
touch in silence; my eyes strive
to focus, but can't.
Love is in-
compre-
hens-
ible.

Friday, February 3, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 13 May 2006

This one works beautifully. I enjoyed it very much. Sincerely, Alison

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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

A nicely crafted love poem.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 February 2006

And sometimes quite giddy and foolish. And that's why we call it love! It frees us to be silly sometimes. In the comfort of someone we trust. Nice poem, Tan. L

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