Inner Pain Poem by Walterrean Salley

Inner Pain

Rating: 4.1


I looked outside
On skies of blue—
It was sunny and bright
With incredible hues.

But inside of my heart
Was pouring rain,
With dark hues
And a cloudy refrain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christopher Khoo 14 May 2011

Well created and touching, I'd rate 9/10. Please check out my poem ' Passive Opinion', Thanks (:

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