Is It Wrong? Poem by Samantha Rose Turner

Is It Wrong?

Rating: 5.0


Is it wrong, to miss you so much?
To live though all of this pain day after day,
Its torture.
Not being able to touch you,
It rips my heart in two.

I miss you so much, But is that wrong?
Days when i cannot hear you,
Makes is seem like your farther away.

Is it wrong if i dream about you?
Wishing you could be with me everynight,
It kills me when i notice your 68 miles away,
But even that seems far away.

Can't you come closer?
Let me see you,
Let me look into your eyes,
Let me hug you and hold you tight,
Just do that for me, and i'll be alright

Dont leave me standing here like this,
I need you, Everyday, Everynight.
I just hope you can see that...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Buxton Shippy 31 December 2011

A poem written from the heart...good work

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Unwritten Soul 30 December 2011

Beautiful and heartfelt write, the point move so smoothly and i wish your work never stop, you gonna be good poetry writer..like this write_Unwritten SOul

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Anthony Han 29 December 2011

Wonderful write Samantha, good enough rhyming, great enough effort!

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