Is This Love Poem by jessica ramirez

Is This Love



whats really love is love something that you think you feel and end up being hurt in the end is it something that makes you feel so good but at the same time makes you feel so depressed inside.Is love evrytime you cry because you hurt so bad.Is it when you have the biggest smile when he touches you and you get a special little tingle in your body is it when he looks at you and you look at him and you cant help but smile answer me this is this love? ? ?

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 January 2009

The end of the last line needs to be redone. Otherwise, I thought this was pretty good. It demonstrated good emotion in the words. The writer cares about her subject. That is always a good thing. GW62

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