I Tear My Heart Open Poem by jessica ramirez

I Tear My Heart Open



i tear my heart open n give it to u hoping u wont break it n all the fear i had in my heart is gone becuz i give it 2 u. l know my love is not the eastiest thing 2 hold but i hope u dont give up when my heart may seem like its not urs but know that my heart is urs n i will do everything n my power 2 not be feared of it n inbrace the love i have for u so i tear my heart open n now its urs

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 January 2009

This is not the easiest thing to read with all the ' u's ' and 'n's' and such. But it really is a good write otherwise. I particularly likerd the return to the beginning at the end. All good poems have a circular story to tell. A really fine job. GW62

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