Kat Smith

Rookie - 90 Points (it would have been Wednesday but Wednesday was cancelled due to a scheduling error / night vale)

It Only Hurts - Poem by Kat Smith

It only hurts when I breath

Breath

Poison air

And I know you've been here

It only hurts when I open my eyes

See all the world destroyed

All the dead girls and boys

It only hurts when I move

Gravity pulls my under ground

It only hurts when I run

Away from all pain

It only hurts when i cry

Tears making there canals

Burning down my face




It only hurts when it hurts


Poet's Notes about The Poem

its not my best in fact i think its awful

Comments about It Only Hurts by Kat Smith

  • Gold Star - 15,462 Points John Westlake (4/26/2014 8:43:00 AM)

    I understand this in several ways. You say it only hurts, but in this case saying that amplifies it to the reader (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sesan Falade (8/3/2013 1:04:00 PM)

    nice one kitty! it really hurts (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Joshua Fegley (8/3/2013 1:19:00 AM)

    Nice write Kitty. I have to breath the poison of society, it smells. I breath shallow. Even when it feels good, there's always the waiting for it to feel bad again, so there's rarely any enjoyment. Whatever you do, don't read my poems. Peace. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,280 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/2/2013 8:58:00 PM)

    very good write it only hurts, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, March 16, 2015


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