Kat Smith

Rookie - 91 Points (it would have been Wednesday but Wednesday was cancelled due to a scheduling error / night vale)

So, What, I Died - Poem by Kat Smith

So what i died
a little inside
when i saw you turn your back
i thought you'd of said good bye
so much for that
i thought you'd of nodded at me
show me that i wasnt dead to you
so what i died a little in side
whats it to you
i look down that path
the one we could of took together
we could of walk it hand and hand
so what i died a little when i looked back on the road not trodden
well worn, but not by us
so what i died a little inside
whats it too yah


Poet's Notes about The Poem

all i have too say is that ive got nothing to say

Comments about So, What, I Died by Kat Smith

  • Gold Star - 15,578 Points John Westlake (4/25/2014 6:32:00 PM)

    Everyone has something to say. I can relate to this one in several ways (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,578 Points John Westlake (4/25/2014 6:32:00 PM)

    Everyone has something to say. I can relate to this one in several ways (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,208 Points Lyn Paul (8/13/2013 9:30:00 PM)

    Like your power in the ending line Kitty. You have alot to say for your age, I like that. keep it up and you will go far. I will pop back to read your other work. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/1/2013 8:45:00 PM)

    we are dying a little a little daily. good write.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 2, 2013


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