It's Raining Tears Poem by rayni black

It's Raining Tears



I have tears in my eyes,
But you don’t see them there.
I know you don’t see them,
Because you don’t really care

They’re flowing like rivers,
Falling like the rain.
The only reason they’re there
Is because im in so much pain

The tears that are falling
Are falling for you
You toy with my emotions
And throw them askew

Im drowning in my tears
Im in head deep
I see you looking at me
And I start to weep

I hope you know
That I gave it all I could
You said this wouldn’t happen
But I knew that it would

This is it now
Im taking my last breath
The tears have swallowed me
And I have nothing left.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
L. Racaniello 26 February 2008

I can feel your pain... but you must choose either to use punctuation or not. Your words are thrown askew without punctuation. I think you should use it. Not leaving im when it s/b I'm

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