Its My Life Poem by jatin rout

Its My Life

Rating: 4.3


Twinkle twinkle little star,
How you sweetuu what u are.

Came to my life,
like a life changing device.

Everyones life cycle changes,
As the spam of time changes.
Sometimes we do what we never want,
It’s the situation which force us to do that.

My life is also going up n down,
With different jobs in different town.
I was so depressed due to what happened,
Thought this as a punishment.

But one day a sweet angel came to my dream,
Saying me how to tackle the problem in the life stream.
She is so sweet than anyone,
Her caring n understanding beaten by no one.

She has some special quality,
To manage the surroundings n society to a unity.
She seems like an allrounder,
Bcoz she is a singer, lecturer, painter as well as dancer.

She cames to u to show the life and,
Make u understand what u deserve in ur life.
She is really a sweetheart,
Who is always with u instead of any fact.

I got the idea to love the life,
Started dreaming n going on the right way of my life.

Now-a-days my morning starts with her fresh wishes,
Evening passes with her cheerful words n thoughts,
N again night with her lovely dreams.

Whenever she starts tlking/replying,
It feels like fresh flowers blossoming.
No one can be sad,
with her motivated words.

she believe in Gods worship,
guys u know she is also taking fast for our friendship.
twinkle twinkle little star,
missing u sweetuu as always u are.

its her VEEER

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shilpi Saxena 24 July 2011

Hey Veer the words u used r very impressive & meaningful. This Poem is very precious for me like a pearl. u have done a very good job u deserves full marks. so keep it up.......... my so sweet veer A++++++++++++ its always urs sweetu

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Nisha- Butterflydreams 02 August 2011

Very very sweet poem Veer! I smiled at the blossoming love your heart expresses :)

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hello.. wonderful poem.. :) m happy to realize my friend has started loving his life nd njoying..! ! hope she is always der wid u..! god bless both.. :)

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Pradnya P 04 July 2012

good one, i liked it

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Wahab Abdul 07 March 2012

A VERY NICE POEM INDEED...POET YOU HAVE AN IMMENSE TALENT PLEASE CARRY ON AND WRITE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEMS...I WISH YOU SUCCESS.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 05 March 2012

wonderful poem.... mystic melody and good life story)))) you are a poet, because you write by your soul, it is the most important))))

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Dead Leaf 07 January 2012

nice.......i like it

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Vipins Puthooran 26 December 2011

A sweet love! ! ! ! I like it! ! !

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