Jinggahartono Poem by Jingga Hartono

Jinggahartono

Rating: 4.8


Just by sitting on this chair
I can remember our first "Hi"
Naked white board sees our memories
Grey windows feel our warmth friendship
Glass in black know the truth
A silent corridor hears our laugh and cry
Happy sad memories we have passed, even
A promise one day will see you again
Rosy day as our living testimony of our promise
Thanks for always be there is not our goodbye words
Only with you I can stand bravely now
Now, it's our time to have a real war
Once again, this is not our farewell
It's our first "Hi" with the new us

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
So, in my third poem, for me it is chalengging because I try to make a poem through my name. if you read carefully, the first words in every single sentence there starts with the letters of my name, JINGGAHARTONO. It's a project exactly and we have done it. not only me, but my friends too. when I made this poem, I think about my friends, we have a step by step relationship, which is started with stranger, now.. one by one will seperate or maybe we will rarely meet again, but hopefully it will not change how precious our relationship! Love you, Friends. say it to your friends! happy reading..^^
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 06 July 2016

This style of poem is called an acrostic. Very well done, Jingga. Friendships are mysterious sometimes. They start out of the blue, evolve and sometimes fade away

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Jingga Hartono 07 July 2016

You r right Mr.Kelly too mysterious to realize that you r in a sweet friendship.. You can't throwback the time.. You just can protect it.. Thank you for reading..

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Ernest Makuakua 06 February 2016

a beautiful tactic of writing your poems i respect that for no one can steal your work we all have a way a style of how we write our poems its in every writer to have a style of writing identifying him/her. i love the piece its beautifully written thanks for such wonderful work

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