Last Goodbye Poem by Jingga Hartono

Last Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


It's hard to wave your hand
When it's busy to wipe the tears
It's hard to walk away from you
When running to you is the right choice
It's hard to say a "goodbye"
When this heart keep shouting "stay with me"

This body paralyzes when you're gone
Even this heart is rebelling
This brain can't even think straight
All I can do is just looking at you
Walk away from me

Please don't go
Please say it is a nightmare
Please wake me up

Even I am awake now
It's still a harsh reality
I need to accept
That when you start a hello
Be ready for an unexpected goodbye

Tuesday, February 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is my first poem and also my first time to publish my poem in this Poemhunter.com. read, enjoy and comment. thankyou.. happy reading
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 17 February 2016

Please don't go Please say it is a nightmare Please wake me up Be ready for an unexpected goodbye.... life and its mysteries, complications of a love and a relationship. all that is portrayed here. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Jingga Hartono 17 February 2016

Thank you for reading my poem.. Keep reading and keep making poem Mr. Tony.. Happy reading! !

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Ernest Makuakua 06 February 2016

beautiful poem emotional It's hard to say a goodbye When this heart keep shouting stay with me I need to accept That when you start a hello Be ready for an unexpected goodbye like these lines sometimes you need to let go of what you have to receive whats best and yes it will hurt at first but the sooner we accept the better understanding of what we may have been loosing focusing on what s not there beautiful

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Jingga Hartono 06 February 2016

thank you Mr. Makuakua.. I do like those lines.. really need to be ready for everythings that happen in our life.. thank you for reading.. keep giving me the comments, keep reading and making poems too..

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Jingga Hartono 06 February 2016

thank you

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Soul Watcher 02 February 2016

Be ready for an unexpected goodbye most of them come suddenly. Well done Jingga.

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Jingga Hartono 06 February 2016

thank you I do like those words..

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Gajanan Mishra 02 February 2016

unexpected good bye, good one, thanks..

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Jingga Hartono 06 February 2016

thank you Mr. Mishra for reading and give the positive comment.

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