Journey Poem by Vinit Kumar

Journey

Rating: 5.0


Freedom in recluse,
Joy evades all constraints,
Thoughts gradually sink deep,
Reaching liberation, profound imagination,
In a state of no rush, no fuss,
Though echoes meander around,
Inner peace seldom worries about,
Patronising time but no clock.
No clock, no stop,
Actions flow like a molten rock; defined in fluid form.
So, dress up, straight up.
No mask, no makeup.
No grief, no blithe,
Nothing temporal.
Just Keep it simple.
A beginning that's humble.
And an end memorable.

Friday, October 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: random thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 October 2017

Joy evades all constraints, very nice..!

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Vinit Kumar 14 October 2017

Thank you So much Mr. Dilip.

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Dawn Novus 13 October 2017

I love my life..

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Vinit Kumar 14 October 2017

It's a gift and you should. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 October 2017

Such a great poem, Vinit... a highest 10+++++

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Vinit Kumar 14 October 2017

Thank you so much Bernard :)

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