David McLansky

Veteran Poet - 1,048 Points (5/24/1944 / New York City)

Judy K. When We Were Very Young - Poem by David McLansky

You were lost,
An elfin sprite;
Sadly tossed,
You''d spend the night;

I gave you my bed,
I took the couch;
I gave you pajamas
You stood a mouse.

Standing in my living room
Only wearing pajama tops;
I could not add to your doom,
As a seducer, I a flop.


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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 3, 2013


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