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David McLansky

Rookie - 408 Points (5/24/1944 / New York City)

Judy K. When We Were Very Young


You were lost,
An elfin sprite;
Sadly tossed,
You''d spend the night;

I gave you my bed,
I took the couch;
I gave you pajamas
You stood a mouse.

Standing in my living room
Only wearing pajama tops;
I could not add to your doom,
As a seducer, I a flop.

Submitted: Friday, November 01, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, December 03, 2013

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