David McLansky

Veteran Poet - 1,194 Points (5/24/1944 / New York City)

in Praise Of Older Women - Poem by David McLansky

Give me not
Your nubile girls
Experts on the course of life,
Whose baby cheeks
Unshadowed eyes
Bespeak the fact
They've never cried.

Give to me
A love of sorrow
Whose flesh has known
Fear of tomorrow;
Whose hands have shaken
With life's knowledge
Never gained
By years of college.

Give to me
A love whose sated
Scores of lovers
Proved ill-fated,
Grateful for the touch
That brings
The revival of
Youth's fateful Spring.

Give me not
Your heart unbroken,
The n'er betrayed
By words unspoken,
Who never watched
Love walk away,
The unforsworn
On rainy days.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about in Praise Of Older Women by David McLansky

  • Freshman - 511 Points Elaine Sept (9/18/2014 1:21:00 AM)

    You so beautifully put moments of life to words. You are a master poet!
    xox (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 343 Points F. J. Thomas (8/4/2014 7:36:00 AM)

    Many a tired woman would read this and smile David. You would make a woman who has forgotten the beauty of her youth and not yet recognized the beauty in her age feel wanted again. Beautiful David (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,222 Points David Harris (7/23/2014 4:27:00 AM)

    Obviously a connoisseur. excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,075 Points Noreen Carden (7/8/2014 9:04:00 AM)

    Speaking as an older woman let me say bravo a man[ as we say in Ireland ] who knows his onions. The poem is delightful also well done (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,381 Points Eugene Levich (5/12/2014 8:05:00 AM)

    I don't know what I most admire- your good taste in poetry or your good taste in women! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hayden Shreeve (4/9/2014 5:33:00 AM)

    Beautiful. Excellent work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,125 Points Amitava Sur (4/6/2014 12:53:00 AM)

    It's a lovely thoughtful poem for loving the older woman (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 112 Points Thomas Vaughan Jones (3/26/2014 5:34:00 AM)

    David, you are a rascal. I hope you haven't been exploiting these older women of whom you speak so eloquently. (At least, not wiithout me)
    Have a look at the lady in my profile. I found her when she was 70.
    So I know of what you speak, and it's all good.
    lol (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,384 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (3/24/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    Brilliant work and masterfully written, content and flow excellent. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, March 24, 2014

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