David McLansky

Veteran Poet - 1,562 Points (5/24/1944 / New York City)

in Praise Of Older Women - Poem by David McLansky

Give me not
Your nubile girls
Experts on the course of life,
Whose baby cheeks
Unshadowed eyes
Bespeak the fact
They've never cried.

Give to me
A love of sorrow
Whose flesh has known
Fear of tomorrow;
Whose hands have shaken
With life's knowledge
Never gained
By years of college.

Give to me
A love whose sated
Scores of lovers
Proved ill-fated,
Grateful for the touch
That brings
The revival of
Youth's fateful Spring.

Give me not
Your heart unbroken,
The n'er betrayed
By words unspoken,
Who never watched
Love walk away,
The unforsworn
On rainy days.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about in Praise Of Older Women by David McLansky

  • Elaine Sept Elaine Sept (9/18/2014 1:21:00 AM)

    You so beautifully put moments of life to words. You are a master poet!
    xox (Report) Reply

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  • F. J. Thomas F. J. Thomas (8/4/2014 7:36:00 AM)

    Many a tired woman would read this and smile David. You would make a woman who has forgotten the beauty of her youth and not yet recognized the beauty in her age feel wanted again. Beautiful David (Report) Reply

  • David Harris (7/23/2014 4:27:00 AM)

    Obviously a connoisseur. excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Noreen Carden Noreen Carden (7/8/2014 9:04:00 AM)

    Speaking as an older woman let me say bravo a man[ as we say in Ireland ] who knows his onions. The poem is delightful also well done (Report) Reply

  • Eugene Levich Eugene Levich (5/12/2014 8:05:00 AM)

    I don't know what I most admire- your good taste in poetry or your good taste in women! (Report) Reply

  • Hayden Shreeve Hayden Shreeve (4/9/2014 5:33:00 AM)

    Beautiful. Excellent work. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (4/6/2014 12:53:00 AM)

    It's a lovely thoughtful poem for loving the older woman (Report) Reply

  • Thomas Vaughan Jones Thomas Vaughan Jones (3/26/2014 5:34:00 AM)

    David, you are a rascal. I hope you haven't been exploiting these older women of whom you speak so eloquently. (At least, not wiithout me)
    Have a look at the lady in my profile. I found her when she was 70.
    So I know of what you speak, and it's all good.
    lol (Report) Reply

  • Cynthia Buhain-baello Cynthia Buhain-baello (3/24/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    Brilliant work and masterfully written, content and flow excellent. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, March 24, 2014


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