Just Friends Poem by Luz Hanaii

Just Friends

Rating: 5.0


You didn't want to lose me
though you know you have.
My heart will not be deceived.
We've shared so much
a lifetime of memories,
hardships and dreams.

And here we are, being just friends
not that you wouldn't want to
mesmerize me back again,
but my heart has seen the light
it has learn to distinguish
a true diamond from glass.

@5/05/17
Luz Hanaii

Monday, December 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: deceit,love and friendship,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 12 December 2019

An expression straight from the heart.......10+++

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Luz Hanaii 14 December 2019

Bernard, I thank you much for all your support and all the tens you've given me.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2019

Indeed, such a biggest difference between true diamond and glass I cite your beautiful lines here: but my heart has seen the light it has learn to distinguish a true diamond from glass...................Most beautifully worded, dear Luz! A 10 full score and much much more! God's Blessings in abundance for you.

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Luz Hanaii 14 December 2019

Thanks dear Sylvia, I appreciate your comment.

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Luz Hanaii 09 December 2019

I appreciated your reading and commenting.

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Kostas Lagos 09 December 2019

Painful is the route from love to friendship...beautiful poem

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