Just, Writing Away Poem by Sandra Feldman

Just, Writing Away

Rating: 5.0


My poetry's.
Deeply simple,
It catches the eye
But fits in a dimple,
I write it,
Not to cry,
With a hip, hip
Hooray,
To satisfy,
A deep, deep
Love and friendship,
I really,
Can't deny.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 19 October 2021

Where it said 'And deep, deep love' Is should say 'A deep deep Love and friendship, I really can't denywhich should not be separated from the rest.

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Kim Barney 19 October 2021

Sandra is in love... with poetry!

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Sandra Feldman 19 October 2021

Dear Sylvia, First of all thank you foryour lovely words for this poem which I greatly appreciate.

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Sandra Feldman 19 October 2021

You were confused because there was a typographical error which I now corrected and

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Sandra Feldman 19 October 2021

The poem was not supposed to have any stanza separation at all. I have noticed that when published on the site they make erratic divisions thatin no way correspond to the original and can spoil the whole meaning and unity of thoughts expressed!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 October 2021

A great poem so inspiring. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 October 2021

Great poetry could indeed create a wonderful relationship out from the beautiful, honest and heartwarming words that uplift the spirit. A bond that will always be treasured.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 October 2021

A very lovely and heartwarming write that really captures the happiness a Poet has in his Poetry.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 October 2021

For dearest Sandra: In case my response on your correction A DEEP DEEP LOVE and FRIENDSHIP do not appear, I repeat that here, thank YOU!

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Sandra Feldman 19 October 2021

Thanks again for all your atention and consideration, Very Appreciated! All the best/

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