hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 68,679 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Keep Moving Ahead - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Good beginning is half work done
Past is past and already gone
See that another leaf is opened
Golden words are silently penned

It is strong resolve
That solves
The problems
And overcome them

Nothing works
Than work
It must find
Good start of its kind

Man
Or woman
Must be equally enthusiastic
Bad odor takes place if water remains static

There has to be flow
And constantly go
If wind stops
Everything flops

So to say
Keep moving away
From the position
To form new composition


Comments about Keep Moving Ahead by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 5,307 Points Patricia Grantham (8/9/2013 9:34:00 PM)

    This is a really good message. Keep moving and don't stop because you
    will lose your place and some other may take it and run. Staying in the same
    spot can stagnate you just like a pond that has no moving water. Very inspiring. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2013 10:11:00 PM)

    Stefania Bulas · Friends with Ashraful Musaddeq
    Takes two to make sparks...
    46 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2013 10:11:00 PM)

    Bu Magda and Sheikh Talha like this.

    Bu Magda Ya keep moving....
    about an hour ago via mobile · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2013 10:02:00 PM)

    good


    Wilda Davis47 minutes ago
    this is very good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2013 9:14:00 PM)


    Thanks


    Eric Melton9 minutes ago
    Good job (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2013 9:13:00 PM)


    Melissa Norton12 minutes ago
    well written, I like this,
    Comment +1
    Clever message and Word Choice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2013 9:13:00 PM)

    Mitch Gundrum12 minutes ago
    I really enjoyed the differing forms and structures this took on, as well as the attention to word choice and rhyme. well done! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2013 9:12:00 PM)

    Half hearted attempt to inspire the dead


    Brian LeeLess than a minute ago
    I'm about the least qualified to critique another I'm not sure my own words would be considered poetry it's just a way to release some of my pain before it consumes me. Seemed to be a positive message maybe a little rushed
    Comment 1 Comment0


    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    give vent to your feeling dear... it is poetry and poetical language.. may be well understood
    0
    I liked it, just missing something. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2013 9:11:00 PM)

    Matt G11 minutes ago
    It works, but it felt like a special message was never delivered. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2013 8:50:00 PM)

    Good beginning is half work done
    Past is past and already gone (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2013 8:22:00 PM)

    Good beginning is half work done
    Past is past and already gone (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013


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