Foolish was I to keep wanting more
point blank she shot me
tinman I am as I've become heartless
bang bang that thunderous sound again
murder murder like a vulture
she watches with a smile as i bleed out.
A unique confession! Right you are! At first, one should know more about one's loved ones then can demand. Superb piece!
She sounds horrid! You sound a little indifferent, she sounds like she will want to come back for more but you have hardened to her. Got confused with murder murder like a vulture as they are scavengers, so I enter preyed that as been ing your foolishness had your hand on that gun, a struggle......: x x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A heartfelt write, she was evil, pure evil Kelvin, hope you have found better.