My mind's a mess,
Scrambled by the thought of you
A feeling towards that I can't define
The heart of mine, you
Because the soul's whole, you
It would be a crime
A life, any life without.
Doubts? Never
I do, but not forever
Is not enough
Existence beyond the next plane
I will, even if you stop
Very well, this is so nice, especially the meaning well done.!
Totally get your anguish and pain! Feelings transcend beyond culture, beliefs, conditioning etc! We feel them There fore they are not invisible. We have to deal with them, but try to cause the least pain for everyone involved, including ourselves!
I like this, Kelvin, how you define your world with the character you and the determination not to stop defining and loving...
A fusion of emotion and freedom, telling all from heart with one intention, such a good one for a good write..keep it up_Unwritten Soul
wow.too philosophical.that's the nice one i've ever read. tnx
wonderful lines.. Reminding of immortal words of. 1. By Rabindranath Tagore, Faith is that bird, sing much before the dawn, 2.Rumi There is plane above good and bad, I will meet you there, 3. Nisargadatta maharaj Knowledge says I am nothing, Love says I am everything, Between my life flows! Thank you!
I like this Kelvin, the focus on the as your world and that around this person in the poem your thoughts and heart are captured.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like this poem. I like that you convey that you're mind is messed up and you have doubts about moving foward, but you still won't stop.