Ladies In Color Red Poem by Heather Burns

Ladies In Color Red

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A lady
dressed
in red
was
walking.

when it
started
to rain
opened her
umbrella.

To keep
from
getting
wet.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
we all need an umbrella on a rainy day.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 29 June 2013

good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Patricia Grantham 06 July 2013

Red is usually a color of seduction. When she opened the umbrella to shield her from the rain her face was hidden from view. Onlookers would try to take a peek as to her looks. Enjoyed.

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Farah Ilyas 02 July 2013

hey i am in awe how u composed poem with the duality of meaning, we should save something for our raing days 2ndly how lady dressed in red would save her longer.. ur poem is masterpiece in itself

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Tribhawan Kaul 01 July 2013

Very nice poem. Enjoyed as usual. I am a fan of your poetry.

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Wahab Abdul 30 June 2013

nice read lady with umbrella and she wishes not to get wet..............lovely...

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Dinesan Madathil 30 June 2013

Ha.. a lady in red with an umbrella above her head treading towards all of us... A fine write Heather

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