Lake Swimming Poem by Stevie Taite

Lake Swimming

Rating: 4.0


Streamlined hands spear the lake, cascading a rhythm repeated
Smooth undulation descends with each stroke I take
A perpetual movement where my weight is defeated
Streamlined hands spear the lake

Effortless, graceful, no splash do I make
White noise sees my stresses retreated
Leaving my worries back there in my wake

A mile, maybe two, body and mind, meditation completed
Wonderfully tired, beginning to flake
The waters do witness a tension deleted.
Streamlined hands spear the lake.

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Nader Baheri 25 February 2013

fabulous.swimming lake really would be so relaxing.~nb

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Kelvin Owusu 25 February 2013

nice write enjoyable read, loved the second stanza

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