Land Of War Poem by Thampi KEE

Land Of War

Rating: 5.0


and I think no rain,
and you end laughing....
now I miss you in tears darling

I can not wait
till the bloodshed ends
we speak loudly
support you the 'young man'

true spirit of venture along
this autumn wind falling
I try to keep your heart warm again
till we keep them away from this land
the pirates in our sea not wait for war

God dont say peace
mad to keep them in our land
God can you say peace...
please keep gun for war..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Petz 02 December 2008

This is a prayer for the world

0 0 Reply
Kite Remedy 03 December 2008

War results nothing but sadness, right? A great piece, i like it more than much..

0 0 Reply
Rekha Mandagere 05 August 2011

The curse of war is existing since the birth of humans on this earth! Where is place for peace? When is the end for wars? Friend, it is very deep and thought provoking. I wish to read these poems more and more. Thanks for sharing. Marks 10+

0 0 Reply
Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'True spirit of venture along' Rachel Ann Butler

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2009

brilliant use of words Thampi...good work...10

0 0 Reply
C.H. Seow 15 December 2008

definitely a brilliant poem for the century....when will human hault in hurting each other? a 10 for me!

0 0 Reply
Sarwar Chowdhury 05 December 2008

Thoughtful........heartfelt.........beautiful reflection! ......10+

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success