Monica Hinson


Let The Sun Shine - Poem by Monica Hinson

We pollute the water
We poison the land
We burn all our trees
For supply and demand

The sun won’t shine
And frankly, I don’t blame it
We screwed this world up
But we can still save it

We use nuclear attacks
And kill the human race
We wipe our whole cultures
Cuz we don’t like their face

The sun wants to shine
But it cannot bare
To watch us destroy ourselves
Without even a care

We need the sun
It’s our source of life
So don’t let the sun die
Because of our strife

Work it all out
I know you can do it
Don’t just kill, people
Try to work through it


Comments about Let The Sun Shine by Monica Hinson

  • Rookie ((Monty Hinson)) (2/6/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    Your poem adds real meaning to how important it is not to take for granted what we have. Our planet is our only home and should be treated with dignity and respect....
    Please keep up the good work your doing! (Smile)
    Monty Hinson
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  • Rookie Junior Pocoloco (2/5/2009 1:04:00 PM)

    A very caring poem. The word you use Sun can also be seen as Love. Very very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (2/5/2009 1:00:00 PM)

    Great hope in the idea but things happen. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Dohoney (2/5/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    this is excellent, I'm all for the environment and the stuff your talking about is so true (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 5, 2009


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